WALT use simple and compound sentences

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WALT make the ordinary extroadinary

Orange.                                                                                                                                

My   mouth  is  watering. 

All  I  can  think   of  is  GOBBLING  IT  DOWN.  

I    BURST   INTO  HUNGER.  

I  ate an orange.                                                                                              

BY    AMANDA  JANE  HEAPE 

WALT to make the ordinary extroadinary

                            I  scoffed on an orange for brainfood 

Ohhh. SOOO juicy! My mouth is watering SOOO much that if I open my mouth it will detonate everywhere with syliva! I can see the flesh and the skin along with little brown dots,the white flesh and the skin,the seeds,juice,the core and a pattern. Ohhh Man,its as juicy as a juicy waterfall! Its round,sweet,sour and of course...IT’S AN ORANGE!!!!!!!!!

                                          By Katie Andrew   

WALT use powerful verbs in our writing

My   Goal.

‘’ Pass it to me Trace’’ I said. ‘’Ok!’’ Kick, Kick, Kick! I was getting clogged by the other team, the Clendon titans. I tried kicking around them and I was approaching  my goal. One player came running for me but I jolted him out of the way. KICK!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!! I got  it in! The crowd was roaring at me.VICTORY!!!! I felt amazing.

     By Holly Brown.

My goal                                                                                                                           On friday night it was windy. It sounded like a dog howling. Also it was raining like a volcano sqourting out lava. Then it was game time I was ready then the ball went flying. I caught it and I made a run for it like a jaguar sprinting down a race track. I passed the ball to my mate. He passed it back and I leaped like a frog right to the try line and the crowd went crazy.

                                                    

                                         By Luke Wooding

Planet Poem

POP!  POP!   

Sweaty as sweat! 

I am as hot as MARS   

I’m  EARTHS  sister   planet.   

I’m the slowest  of  all  planets

I am  venus.

                                                     BY   GABRIEL

Water Shape Poems

My water poem

The blue beautiful water 

                           is trickling down 

                                            the rocks 

                                                   as cold as  ice 

                                   Splash

                              Spit

                                  Swish

                      

BY EMMA