WALT use powerful verbs in our writing

My   Goal.

‘’ Pass it to me Trace’’ I said. ‘’Ok!’’ Kick, Kick, Kick! I was getting clogged by the other team, the Clendon titans. I tried kicking around them and I was approaching  my goal. One player came running for me but I jolted him out of the way. KICK!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!! I got  it in! The crowd was roaring at me.VICTORY!!!! I felt amazing.

     By Holly Brown.

My goal                                                                                                                           On friday night it was windy. It sounded like a dog howling. Also it was raining like a volcano sqourting out lava. Then it was game time I was ready then the ball went flying. I caught it and I made a run for it like a jaguar sprinting down a race track. I passed the ball to my mate. He passed it back and I leaped like a frog right to the try line and the crowd went crazy.

                                                    

                                         By Luke Wooding