Wednesday 1 June 2011

Planet Poem

POP!  POP!   
Sweaty as sweat! 
I am as hot as MARS   
I’m  EARTHS  sister   planet.   
I’m the slowest  of  all  planets
I am  venus.
                                                     BY   GABRIEL
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  1. Katie1 June 2011 at 22:33

    Well done Gabe,

    I like how you used your similes and metaphors 'sweaty as sweat!Im as hot as MARS'

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